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“Save the Cat” Part 3: Using a Beat Sheet to Edit “Army of Brass”

I used lessons learned from Save the Cat while finishing up the writing and editing of the collaborative novel, Army of Brass. (Available now!) I

I started this series based on using Blake Snyder’s Save the Cat back in August when I thought I’d trucking right along in the “Mistress of

In 2016, I found my way to the embrace of the Collaborative Writing Challenge. I coordinated their 7th project, Army of Brass, starting December of

Vi’s body relaxed and she rolled to face the wall to better welcome sleep. She breathed into the gentle dark for a few moments, then

The ghost chuckled and leaned against the wall. “Got yourself some light fingers, eh kid?” “I didn’t do it!” the little boy cried. “I swear!”

“I figured it out,” Bonnie declared as she slid open the cabin door. George waited patiently in the hall, ready to tidy the room once